but can I tell you that it throws me completely out of a story when somebody says "what are you thinking right now?" it has nothing to do with bad writing, it's just that I had an incident where i was asked that during an abortive hook-up once, and it still gives me the willies.
"what are you thinking right now?"
but can I tell you that it throws me completely out of a story when somebody says "what are you thinking right now?" it has nothing to do with bad writing, it's just that I had an incident where i was asked that during an abortive hook-up once, and it still gives me the willies.
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