November 5th, 2004

Shinchilla

is your name really shithead?

Here's another, reasonably sized chunk of the NaNo, ~900 words. More talk of the rat and the introduction of Steve.

Can somebody tell me whether the joke at the end comes across when read? It's a verbal story and i'm having trouble making it as funny textually.

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AN: this really happened to someone I know at a Blockbuster.
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