September 3rd, 2007


Happiness Again, Only Correct This Time

because mark356 is a god among ljers, we just worked the whole way back through "Happiness" together and fixed all of my (admittedly less horrifying than I thought it would be) bungling.

THANK YOU SUGIRU *_* it was so nice to have intelligent things explained to me!

so here is the good version:

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I'm just going to leave the other one up the way it is. I kind of like my bungling. *is still proud*
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